World weary soul
for beauty in a mean
longs for affirmation,
that all he has fought for
-ity and not a figment
of his tortured imagi-
Wow – your use of the structure of the words adds a great punch to this. POW!erful writing.
^_^ I’ve mostly taken a break this month, but I got the image/word soul-dier and could not stop thinking about it til I wrote it down.
Thank you! <3
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